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Tuesday 6 November 2012

The Sledge Problem

One cloudy afternoon, a boy called Paul made a sledge so he could ride down the snowy hill.  On the snowy hill his friends friends were there waiting for him.  His friends were Jack, Marcus and Francis.  They were there because they wanted to go snow skiing.

“Hey Paul,” said Marcus.  

“Huh, oh hello Paul,” said Francis.

“Hi Paul,” said Jack  

“Are you guys ready to go down that snow hill,” said Paul.

“YES” shouted Marcus, Francis and Jack together.  So they got ready to go down the snowy hill.  Paul looked at their sledges.  Marcus’s sledge had a blue and orange flame on it.  Francis had a red and black race line on it.  Jack had a skeleton man riding a horse on the side of his sledge.  Paul looked at his sledge but there was nothing on the sides.  Paul was sad because he wanted a sledge just like that.  As they raced down the snowy hill, Paul’s sledge was starting to break up.  His sledge was going “Crack, Crack, Crack,” and pieces of his sledge was falling off.
As Paul went further down the hill, the bottom of his sledge came off.  His sledge was finally broken, and the speed of his sledge made him jump up into the sky.

“AHHH HELP ME” yelled Paul.  Paul was yelling for help.  When Paul landed, he was stuck in the snow, in the middle of the snow race.  Paul’s left leg was broken.

“Where is Paul” said Marcus.  As Marcus, Francis and Jack got to the bottom, they heard a faint  voice saying “Help me please”.  Marcus, Francis and Jack were wondering who that was.

“Oh no that is Paul, he is stuck on the middle of the snowy hill” explained Marcus.  So Marcus went to Paul’s house and told his mum and dad.  After Marcus explained what happened to Paul, Marcus and Paul’s mum and dad went to find Paul.

“Paul are you alright” shouted Paul’s mum.  Paul’s dad called a policeman to help him get Paul out of the hole he was stuck in.  Then the policeman called the fire fighters.  As the fire fighters and the policeman came, the firefighters had a tall ladder to reach Paul.  When a fire fighter got near Paul he grabbed Paul and pulled him out of the hole.
Then the firefighter brought Paul down to the ground.  Then Paul and his mum and dad went inside to have a sandwich and some Milo to drink.  After that Paul made a sledge with a small picture of a boy stuck in a hole in the middle of a snowy hill.

“Hey, Paul are you OK? Marcus, Francis and I made a get well soon card” said Jack

“Thanks, you guys are my best friends” said Paul.   


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