25 September 2015
Dear Ms Parkes,
Thank you for helping me with my writing. I found an improvement in my writing than last year. Also for some suggestions to my teacher to help with my writing.
I really enjoyed writing the diamante poem because it was a new thing for me. I also enjoyed it because we watched the videos about the snake and the Black Piranha and it helped me describe the creatures with new words.
I also understood the meaning of a simple, compound and complex sentence. Thanks to you and my teacher, I have learned to use them to make my writing better and improve my writing.
I still will need some help adding some compound and complex sentences in my writing to improve it. I appreciate you helping me improve my writing.
Yours Sincerely,
Samuel
