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Wednesday, 25 June 2014

I want to be a Millionaire


Walt: write in paragraphs.

I want to be a Millionaire.  I want to become a Millionaire because I want to live in a mansion and be famous.  When I get a mansion, I want to decorate the house so it looks nice.  When I become a Millionaire, I also want to help my family by buying them a bigger house and food so they can always eat and drink.  When I become a Millionaire, I want to buy some fancy cars like a Ferrari or a luxurious Rolls Royce.  I also want to buy a car for my family so they can drive to a to b faster than walking.  If I become a Millionaire, I can buy a plane and travel to countries I haven't been to, and countries I want to go to.  I also want to buy stylish clothes and be on tv.    

I always wanted to be a Millionaire because I always wanted to see what happens when I go close to people with millions of dollars.  I also wanted to put security cameras outside my house so that I can see who knocks on my door and if a thief comes to my house, I can send my guards out to get him.  I also want to be a Millionaire because I want to meet famous people and see what I can do with all of my money.  That is what I want to do when I become a Millionaire.   

Sunday, 1 June 2014

We need mouthguards for contact sports

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WALT: write a persuasive speech.


Mouthguards are mandatory to some sports.  Mouthguards are also worn to play sports that involve grounds and stadiums.  Mouthguards are made of soft plastic.  The way mouthguards are made are to protect someones mouth.  

Mouthguards protect your teeth.  Losing teeth is bad because you won’t be able to eat and talk properly.  Mouthguards also cushion your teeth so you can play better at sports.  Mouthguards help prevent damage for your teeth so it does not get chipped or loose teeth.  

Mouthguards protect against jaw injury and neck injury.  Your jaw and neck are important to a person's body because if your neck breaks, you might go to the hospital or get killed.  You also need to protect your jaw so you can eat food.  If your jaw is broken you won’t be able to open your mouth for a couple of days or weeks.

Mouthguards also reduce concussion.  Concussion is when you get hit hard on the head and you get knocked out.  Knocked out is bad because if you're in a middle of a game you, can get trampled on.  Concussion also make you get brain damage.  If your brain gets damaged, you might forget things and your brain might be seriously damaged.

I can see from the reasons I have given above that everyone who is involved or play sports  with contact, need to wear mouthguards.  If people ignore this rule, they will get hurt.